trying to live a life is a half life

an ordinary

minus

there is no such thing if one is living

to live only part way

we must stop calling life something we have to fix

or correct

we damage what is meant to be a gift

crushing the package and then

the contents

in some grand attempt to make better as if

it were not perfection before

we got our hands on it

if something really needs to change to become

its real

best then

all it needs is heart

felt commitment